Post by Madame Pika on Apr 10, 2009 8:47:37 GMT -5
I’ve never done this sort of thing before but I felt that as a Daisuke fan and a Hikari fan it had to be done.
Ken: Do we really have to say anything about this?
Koushirou: It does speak for itself
Hikari and Daisuke: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Davis is a human being,
Mimi: well done, I think that even the dub version of me could work that out, in fact the dub version of Daisuke.
Daisuke: Actually aren’t we all just ink and whatever they draw anime on with cool voices behind us.
Mimi: This is a story so I was trying to give him the benefit of the doubt.
Hikari: Don’t! Please. Just don’t. This guy might take it the wrong way.
Yamato: and this is an MST.
Mimi: I’m not good at this.
and like all humans he has feelings too,
Taichi: Well, not all humans have feelings. In fact…
but right now no one seems to give a care in the world how he can feel, but he is about to be given a chance to show everyone some sides of him no one ever thought possible.
Ken: and that’s just the summary. Can you take the cheesy-ness of this fiction. We’re being forced too. Stupid MST er.
Daisuke: No, good MSTer, good.
Koushirou: MST-er isn’t a word.
Ken: According to this fic it is… (Which is way we can spell it however we want).
A few years after Maylo-Myotismon was beaten, and the Digi destined had grown-up a little more…
Ken: Wonder if he’ll ever start a story of at a different time.
Miyako: He has. You don’t want to read it.
Tai and his gang had all gone to college, and Davis’ gang were in their second year of High-school, except for Cody who was still in grade eight. He was still in junior high, but would you believe it… he actually had a girlfriend.
Iori: Why me? What did I ever do? At least Hikari sort of played with Daisuke…
Hikari: It’s called friendly banter.
Her name was Hitomi, and she was really into kendo, and she also had a bit of sensitivity in her.
Iori: Is this really all that he has to say about her?
Sora: That was all he had to say about you.
Iori: He managed to get my character stereotype in within two lines.
As for the others, in high-school.
Koushirou: I like the full-stop in the middle of the sentence. Word picked it up nicely.
Yolei and Ken started dating right when they got home, after Yolei finally admitted her long kept feelings from him.
Miyako: Yay, once again, we appear as a background pairing.
Ken: In this story, I’m made out of card broad. I hope I get wet because then he can’t use me.
Davis even Joked about the time Yolei wanted to shake his hand just because he had touch Ken’s hand.
Daisuke: I touched his hand.
Kari… well she did have a boyfriend at one time, but he moved away to America, and they had to break-up. She wasn’t really up to dating anyone new yet as she hadn’t decided who.
Yamato: Looks at author’s name. I wonder who that who could be?
Sora: Is the tension wrapping you up in cotton wool?
Yamato: yes.
Hikari: a whole paragraph where he doesn’t say something stupid about me. I’m putting a mark on my calendar.
Besides, she and Yolei were on the school student body team, and they were in charge of organizing fun events. Dances, field trips, fundraisers… all that stuff. They sure were busy those days
Mimi: I feel sorry for people who actually have learning difficulties.
TK was dating, Mina Anio.
Mimi: very sorry.
(The Sailor Venus girl)[/i]
Takeru: at least in this one he admits he stole the name. Why is she here anyway?
Hikari: he wanted not to bash you.
Takeru: but I’m not the one who he’s trying to pair with his favourite character.
Daisuke: When some people do that it’s because of the fact that they can’t get with the character themselves. I’m scared.
Hikari: I AM NOT ANYTHING LIKE MYKAN!
She was a an incredibly pretty blonde cheerleader TK had a long time crush on, but never had the nerve to ask her out.
Mimi: What have people with learning difficulties done to this guy?
No one quite remember how it happened, but they were now dating for 6 months and counting, and they really seemed to be getting along well.
Sora: No one quite rememberS how it happened,
Takeru: Considering that according to his profile he hates me, I really don’t mind this being said. I mean she’s not a Mary-Sue or self-insertion…
Daisuke: Don’t give this guy ideas.
Yeah, the all seemed to be getting through their days quite well… all except Davis that is.
Koushirou: Who’s this group, ‘all’? Are they nice?
Sora: I hope they are.
Davis had also been acting very strange lately. For one thing, he wasn’t his usual up-right boasting self anymore,
Hikari: Isn’t that an oxymoron? Up-right boasting…
Patamon: I am so glad that digimon don’t appear in this story.
he preferred not to attend any of the school dances that Kari, and Yolei’s committee had arranged, and he even started to stop coming to regular fun Digi Destined meetings.
V-mon: So many things to say, so little room.
At times, he would just run off to the Digital world, and not tell anyone where he was going, and why, and he also ignored people’s suggestions of how he should get his act together, and gave them a very sad and gloomy expression.
Wormmon: Why aren’t we in this story?
Hikari: You don’t want to be.
Ken: This guy seriously needs to learn how to use full-stops.
Mimi: I wonder who has the sad and gloomy expression.
Daisuke: As this is a Mykan story and in his stories only I’m allowed development…
Mimi: and out of character development at that…
Kari and TK even tried to perk Davis up a little. By perking up, they did their little, “Let’s make Davis Jealous.” thing again!
Hikari: How many times did we do that deliberately in the show?
Takeru: about twice, I think. I mean, I’ve never counted…
Even though they weren’t even a couple, they still liked to tease Davis a bit… and usually it burned his fuse brightly, and gave him energy…
Patamon as Davis: Davis digivolve to…
Daisuke: What fuse? I’m not going to blow up. Am I?
Somehow, even that wasn’t helping…
Ken: Burning things rarely helps anyone…
Hikari: but it is fun!
Everyone but Hikari: pardon.
After school…
Miyako: This feels slightly like script format. Anyway, would we go during school?
Yolei and Ken were going to see Cody at his Grandfather’s dojo, and invited TK, Kari and Davis to tag along. They would visit him, and then head off to the Digital world for some more fun…
Hikari: More fun. We’re already burning ‘Davis’.
Daisuke: I’ll get more coal.
Only, Davis didn’t feel like going… “Sorry, I can’t… I, uh… got stuff to do.” And so he left in a hurry as if he was trying to get away from the others as fast as he could.
Iori: Why would he do that? Doesn’t he want to be burned?
“That was weird.” said Yolei.
Miyako: It’s an author’s confession.
“Yeah… what would Davis have to do that’s so important?” TK wondered.
Takeru: Save himself from the flames.
…
Daisuke: and that was all that was left of ‘Davis’.
When Davis got home, all he did was just go to his room and lie down on his bed, he looked as though he was melting away to nothing.
Hikari: Fire does do that to you, you know.
“Tough day at shchool, Davish?” Veemon asked.
“Plenty.” Davis answered. “Why can’t people understand…”
V-mon: So we are doomed after all.
Patamon: But in the show it states we follow them to school. Heck, one fan even compared us to shadows.
Tailmon: Don’t worry. Our part is small.
Hikari and Daisuke: I wish ours were.
Davis was almost 16, and he still never made any attempts to find his own girlfriend. Well… of course he still liked Kari, everyone knew that. even Kari herself.
Daisuke: Mykan was over 20 and had never made a single friend.
Mimi: that’s mean…
Daisuke: This is an MST. We’re supposed to be mean.
Mimi: but, it’s not like you have any real evidence that Mykan has never had a friend…
Daisuke sighs.
Everyone, claiming to know Davis, just assumed he was probably just being stubborn.
Miyako: It’s the just, just, just song.
Hikari: Wait till we do reach the song.
Miyako: I’m so glad there’s only two in this story.
Yamato: they make me ears bleed.
Refusing to choose a girl just because he couldn’t have Kari… but no, that wasn’t it at all, but no one bothered to ask him what was wrong.
Hikari: (looks at the ashes) dum ti dum dum.
The truth was, no one was into him at all!
Ken: well, I’ve got a strange feeling about this author…
Daisuke: Please, say it isn’t so.
Davis, with his old obnoxious attitude, girls had always thought of him as a total loser.
Ken: note he says girls.
Daisuke: It is so. What do I do?
A Dork! A geek!
Miyako: capital d little g.
Taichi: So is he more of a dork than a geek?
All Davis ever seemed to care about was soccer, and doing things his own way… he didn’t even get quite the good grades back then.
Tailmon: Where do we begin?
Ken: firstly what have grades got to do with anything then we could talk about sentence structure then...
Tailmon: I’m too lazy.
No matter how hard he tried to show it, no one other than the Digi Destined, believed that Davis actually had true inner feelings.
Ken: Did he miss the episodes where it showed that he was the first to forgive me?
Daisuke: Did he miss the episodes where I appear?
That he could be soft, and gentile… and especially kind.
Daisuke: ‘Davis’ was bouncy too. I didn’t know he was gentile.
Even when he, with his sense of obnoxiousness proved well…
Taichi: proved well what?
Hikari: that cabbage is healthier than chocolate?
When all others backed down, he and Veemon kept going, and eventually they had saved they saved the day.
Ken: Did they then all go and have some splendid lemonade, with lashings of ginger beer?
Yamato: Oh, wizzo!
Koushirou: Come on, you two. Not even Enid Blyton would say ‘eventually they had saved they saved’. Please note the double stating of saved.
Why if it wasn’t for Davis… the whole world would’ve been destroyed by Malyo-Myotismon.
Taichi: where did the hyphen come from?
Yamato: It’s close to the back space key.
It was his inspiring people to follow their dreams… his courage, his friendship, and miracles
Daisuke: I only was able to use the digimental of miracles once…
Miyako: How can ‘miracles’ be a trait anyway?
That brought victory against the dark forces.
Daisuke: Kind of ironic that this is his story point but, in another I join those ‘dark forces’.
… As a result, Davis didn’t get much redemption for his actions. Girls still thought him to be a dorky, and obnoxious brat who had to do things his own way, and he even became a popular target for the tough guys making fun of him and saying mean things…
“This little runt, saved us all, you got to be kidding?!”
“Let’s see your powers get you through this, kid!”
“Get a life you dweeb.”
Daisuke: If this was me and not ‘Davis’ than those bullies would have broken noses and…
Hikari, Ken and Miyako: We’d give them to them.
Daisuke: me too. I just felt like saying that I can and do stand up for myself.
All those horrible voices, and nasty comments followed Davis in his mind
Mimi: Mykan people who have scitzophena do not desreve to be made fun off.
everywhere he went, and to that very day, nothing had been the same for him.
Iori: and burning him had no effect… read on kids.
All this shakiness was starting to get at him.
Sora: Shakiness?
He felt unloved, unappreciated, unwanted… and most importantly… he felt unhappy.
Taichi: Well, if he feels unloved than we could guess that he feels unhappy.
Despite what everyone said or thought of him, he was only human and like all humans, he had feelings too.
Hikari: Deja vu?
Feelings that no one seemed to take any notice of.
[Takeru: word highlighted this too. Doesn’t this guy know how a keyboard works?[/color]
That’s why h preferred to be alone.
Taichi: I guess that ‘h’ doesn’t.
No one gave him a chance, no one intended to give him a chance. So Davis’ chances of ever finding someone were somewhere between in his dreams to impossible.
Daisuke: You know I actually have fan girls who would do anything to be with me.
Hikari: and some of them can understand that you’re an anime character.
Even so… he wasn’t so sure he was ready to go for anyone anyways.
Jou: Than what were the last few paragraphs for?
After all, he still liked Kari, and wished to at least have a little chance with her, but who was he kidding. Kari was just like everyone else to him.
Hikari: make up your mind does ‘Davis’ have a crush on ‘Kari’ or not?
Her and her little jealousy pranks with TK only proved to Davis more that she wasn’t into him and she never would be. Even though Kari, like the others saw Davis as a friend, he didn’t think she was being very friendly with all the teasing and making fun of him. That was just being plain mean!
Ken: like Susie from the Secret Seven…
Koushirou: Stop the Enid Blyton references!
Not that she cared anyways, that was what he thought.
Daisuke: I am so glad that I’m not as pathetic as ‘Davis’.
“Boy, just once…” he thought to himself. “Just once, I’d like everyone to know just how I feel. Show them, that I can have my soft sides, or show them that I can feel pain too. Yeah… then they’d feel sorry for beating me up like this.”
Daisuke: This ‘Davis’ is so pathetic. Doesn’t he speak for himself?
Ken: Yeah, we don’t need to MST this.
Taichi: Madame Pika just told me that if we don’t MST this, she’ll make us MST ‘25 years later: children on the Moon’.
Daisuke: You mean the one with the cloning scene that was so unscientifically accurate that she thought that Mykan was a Takari fan in disguise.
Ken: That had to be the most terrifying fiction he’s ever written.
Hikari: No, that would be ‘Bouncing Baby Bonkers’.
Miyako: (giggles at title) what’s so scary about that? It was relatively well written, sort of in character and didn’t bash a single character.
Hikari: It was a Mykan story and that proves Pika wrong.
Miyako: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!
Daisuke: You know that moon base one is 25 chapters long.
Ken: Guess we have to carry on then.
Everyone: (groans) on with the next chapter then.
The Alphabet of Despair!
Ken: Do we really have to say anything about this?
Koushirou: It does speak for itself
By Daikari King Mykan
[/b]Hikari and Daisuke: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Davis is a human being,
Mimi: well done, I think that even the dub version of me could work that out, in fact the dub version of Daisuke.
Daisuke: Actually aren’t we all just ink and whatever they draw anime on with cool voices behind us.
Mimi: This is a story so I was trying to give him the benefit of the doubt.
Hikari: Don’t! Please. Just don’t. This guy might take it the wrong way.
Yamato: and this is an MST.
Mimi: I’m not good at this.
and like all humans he has feelings too,
Taichi: Well, not all humans have feelings. In fact…
but right now no one seems to give a care in the world how he can feel, but he is about to be given a chance to show everyone some sides of him no one ever thought possible.
Ken: and that’s just the summary. Can you take the cheesy-ness of this fiction. We’re being forced too. Stupid MST er.
Daisuke: No, good MSTer, good.
Koushirou: MST-er isn’t a word.
Ken: According to this fic it is… (Which is way we can spell it however we want).
CHAPTER ONE
[/b][/u]A few years after Maylo-Myotismon was beaten, and the Digi destined had grown-up a little more…
Ken: Wonder if he’ll ever start a story of at a different time.
Miyako: He has. You don’t want to read it.
Tai and his gang had all gone to college, and Davis’ gang were in their second year of High-school, except for Cody who was still in grade eight. He was still in junior high, but would you believe it… he actually had a girlfriend.
Iori: Why me? What did I ever do? At least Hikari sort of played with Daisuke…
Hikari: It’s called friendly banter.
Her name was Hitomi, and she was really into kendo, and she also had a bit of sensitivity in her.
Iori: Is this really all that he has to say about her?
Sora: That was all he had to say about you.
Iori: He managed to get my character stereotype in within two lines.
As for the others, in high-school.
Koushirou: I like the full-stop in the middle of the sentence. Word picked it up nicely.
Yolei and Ken started dating right when they got home, after Yolei finally admitted her long kept feelings from him.
Miyako: Yay, once again, we appear as a background pairing.
Ken: In this story, I’m made out of card broad. I hope I get wet because then he can’t use me.
Davis even Joked about the time Yolei wanted to shake his hand just because he had touch Ken’s hand.
Daisuke: I touched his hand.
Kari… well she did have a boyfriend at one time, but he moved away to America, and they had to break-up. She wasn’t really up to dating anyone new yet as she hadn’t decided who.
Yamato: Looks at author’s name. I wonder who that who could be?
Sora: Is the tension wrapping you up in cotton wool?
Yamato: yes.
Hikari: a whole paragraph where he doesn’t say something stupid about me. I’m putting a mark on my calendar.
Besides, she and Yolei were on the school student body team, and they were in charge of organizing fun events. Dances, field trips, fundraisers… all that stuff. They sure were busy those days
Mimi: I feel sorry for people who actually have learning difficulties.
TK was dating, Mina Anio.
Mimi: very sorry.
(The Sailor Venus girl)[/i]
Takeru: at least in this one he admits he stole the name. Why is she here anyway?
Hikari: he wanted not to bash you.
Takeru: but I’m not the one who he’s trying to pair with his favourite character.
Daisuke: When some people do that it’s because of the fact that they can’t get with the character themselves. I’m scared.
Hikari: I AM NOT ANYTHING LIKE MYKAN!
She was a an incredibly pretty blonde cheerleader TK had a long time crush on, but never had the nerve to ask her out.
Mimi: What have people with learning difficulties done to this guy?
No one quite remember how it happened, but they were now dating for 6 months and counting, and they really seemed to be getting along well.
Sora: No one quite rememberS how it happened,
Takeru: Considering that according to his profile he hates me, I really don’t mind this being said. I mean she’s not a Mary-Sue or self-insertion…
Daisuke: Don’t give this guy ideas.
Yeah, the all seemed to be getting through their days quite well… all except Davis that is.
Koushirou: Who’s this group, ‘all’? Are they nice?
Sora: I hope they are.
Davis had also been acting very strange lately. For one thing, he wasn’t his usual up-right boasting self anymore,
Hikari: Isn’t that an oxymoron? Up-right boasting…
Patamon: I am so glad that digimon don’t appear in this story.
he preferred not to attend any of the school dances that Kari, and Yolei’s committee had arranged, and he even started to stop coming to regular fun Digi Destined meetings.
V-mon: So many things to say, so little room.
At times, he would just run off to the Digital world, and not tell anyone where he was going, and why, and he also ignored people’s suggestions of how he should get his act together, and gave them a very sad and gloomy expression.
Wormmon: Why aren’t we in this story?
Hikari: You don’t want to be.
Ken: This guy seriously needs to learn how to use full-stops.
Mimi: I wonder who has the sad and gloomy expression.
Daisuke: As this is a Mykan story and in his stories only I’m allowed development…
Mimi: and out of character development at that…
Kari and TK even tried to perk Davis up a little. By perking up, they did their little, “Let’s make Davis Jealous.” thing again!
Hikari: How many times did we do that deliberately in the show?
Takeru: about twice, I think. I mean, I’ve never counted…
Even though they weren’t even a couple, they still liked to tease Davis a bit… and usually it burned his fuse brightly, and gave him energy…
Patamon as Davis: Davis digivolve to…
Daisuke: What fuse? I’m not going to blow up. Am I?
Somehow, even that wasn’t helping…
Ken: Burning things rarely helps anyone…
Hikari: but it is fun!
Everyone but Hikari: pardon.
After school…
Miyako: This feels slightly like script format. Anyway, would we go during school?
Yolei and Ken were going to see Cody at his Grandfather’s dojo, and invited TK, Kari and Davis to tag along. They would visit him, and then head off to the Digital world for some more fun…
Hikari: More fun. We’re already burning ‘Davis’.
Daisuke: I’ll get more coal.
Only, Davis didn’t feel like going… “Sorry, I can’t… I, uh… got stuff to do.” And so he left in a hurry as if he was trying to get away from the others as fast as he could.
Iori: Why would he do that? Doesn’t he want to be burned?
“That was weird.” said Yolei.
Miyako: It’s an author’s confession.
“Yeah… what would Davis have to do that’s so important?” TK wondered.
Takeru: Save himself from the flames.
…
Daisuke: and that was all that was left of ‘Davis’.
When Davis got home, all he did was just go to his room and lie down on his bed, he looked as though he was melting away to nothing.
Hikari: Fire does do that to you, you know.
“Tough day at shchool, Davish?” Veemon asked.
“Plenty.” Davis answered. “Why can’t people understand…”
V-mon: So we are doomed after all.
Patamon: But in the show it states we follow them to school. Heck, one fan even compared us to shadows.
Tailmon: Don’t worry. Our part is small.
Hikari and Daisuke: I wish ours were.
Davis was almost 16, and he still never made any attempts to find his own girlfriend. Well… of course he still liked Kari, everyone knew that. even Kari herself.
Daisuke: Mykan was over 20 and had never made a single friend.
Mimi: that’s mean…
Daisuke: This is an MST. We’re supposed to be mean.
Mimi: but, it’s not like you have any real evidence that Mykan has never had a friend…
Daisuke sighs.
Everyone, claiming to know Davis, just assumed he was probably just being stubborn.
Miyako: It’s the just, just, just song.
Hikari: Wait till we do reach the song.
Miyako: I’m so glad there’s only two in this story.
Yamato: they make me ears bleed.
Refusing to choose a girl just because he couldn’t have Kari… but no, that wasn’t it at all, but no one bothered to ask him what was wrong.
Hikari: (looks at the ashes) dum ti dum dum.
The truth was, no one was into him at all!
Ken: well, I’ve got a strange feeling about this author…
Daisuke: Please, say it isn’t so.
Davis, with his old obnoxious attitude, girls had always thought of him as a total loser.
Ken: note he says girls.
Daisuke: It is so. What do I do?
A Dork! A geek!
Miyako: capital d little g.
Taichi: So is he more of a dork than a geek?
All Davis ever seemed to care about was soccer, and doing things his own way… he didn’t even get quite the good grades back then.
Tailmon: Where do we begin?
Ken: firstly what have grades got to do with anything then we could talk about sentence structure then...
Tailmon: I’m too lazy.
No matter how hard he tried to show it, no one other than the Digi Destined, believed that Davis actually had true inner feelings.
Ken: Did he miss the episodes where it showed that he was the first to forgive me?
Daisuke: Did he miss the episodes where I appear?
That he could be soft, and gentile… and especially kind.
Daisuke: ‘Davis’ was bouncy too. I didn’t know he was gentile.
Even when he, with his sense of obnoxiousness proved well…
Taichi: proved well what?
Hikari: that cabbage is healthier than chocolate?
When all others backed down, he and Veemon kept going, and eventually they had saved they saved the day.
Ken: Did they then all go and have some splendid lemonade, with lashings of ginger beer?
Yamato: Oh, wizzo!
Koushirou: Come on, you two. Not even Enid Blyton would say ‘eventually they had saved they saved’. Please note the double stating of saved.
Why if it wasn’t for Davis… the whole world would’ve been destroyed by Malyo-Myotismon.
Taichi: where did the hyphen come from?
Yamato: It’s close to the back space key.
It was his inspiring people to follow their dreams… his courage, his friendship, and miracles
Daisuke: I only was able to use the digimental of miracles once…
Miyako: How can ‘miracles’ be a trait anyway?
That brought victory against the dark forces.
Daisuke: Kind of ironic that this is his story point but, in another I join those ‘dark forces’.
… As a result, Davis didn’t get much redemption for his actions. Girls still thought him to be a dorky, and obnoxious brat who had to do things his own way, and he even became a popular target for the tough guys making fun of him and saying mean things…
“This little runt, saved us all, you got to be kidding?!”
“Let’s see your powers get you through this, kid!”
“Get a life you dweeb.”
Daisuke: If this was me and not ‘Davis’ than those bullies would have broken noses and…
Hikari, Ken and Miyako: We’d give them to them.
Daisuke: me too. I just felt like saying that I can and do stand up for myself.
All those horrible voices, and nasty comments followed Davis in his mind
Mimi: Mykan people who have scitzophena do not desreve to be made fun off.
everywhere he went, and to that very day, nothing had been the same for him.
Iori: and burning him had no effect… read on kids.
All this shakiness was starting to get at him.
Sora: Shakiness?
He felt unloved, unappreciated, unwanted… and most importantly… he felt unhappy.
Taichi: Well, if he feels unloved than we could guess that he feels unhappy.
Despite what everyone said or thought of him, he was only human and like all humans, he had feelings too.
Hikari: Deja vu?
Feelings that no one seemed to take any notice of.
[Takeru: word highlighted this too. Doesn’t this guy know how a keyboard works?[/color]
That’s why h preferred to be alone.
Taichi: I guess that ‘h’ doesn’t.
No one gave him a chance, no one intended to give him a chance. So Davis’ chances of ever finding someone were somewhere between in his dreams to impossible.
Daisuke: You know I actually have fan girls who would do anything to be with me.
Hikari: and some of them can understand that you’re an anime character.
Even so… he wasn’t so sure he was ready to go for anyone anyways.
Jou: Than what were the last few paragraphs for?
After all, he still liked Kari, and wished to at least have a little chance with her, but who was he kidding. Kari was just like everyone else to him.
Hikari: make up your mind does ‘Davis’ have a crush on ‘Kari’ or not?
Her and her little jealousy pranks with TK only proved to Davis more that she wasn’t into him and she never would be. Even though Kari, like the others saw Davis as a friend, he didn’t think she was being very friendly with all the teasing and making fun of him. That was just being plain mean!
Ken: like Susie from the Secret Seven…
Koushirou: Stop the Enid Blyton references!
Not that she cared anyways, that was what he thought.
Daisuke: I am so glad that I’m not as pathetic as ‘Davis’.
“Boy, just once…” he thought to himself. “Just once, I’d like everyone to know just how I feel. Show them, that I can have my soft sides, or show them that I can feel pain too. Yeah… then they’d feel sorry for beating me up like this.”
Daisuke: This ‘Davis’ is so pathetic. Doesn’t he speak for himself?
Ken: Yeah, we don’t need to MST this.
Taichi: Madame Pika just told me that if we don’t MST this, she’ll make us MST ‘25 years later: children on the Moon’.
Daisuke: You mean the one with the cloning scene that was so unscientifically accurate that she thought that Mykan was a Takari fan in disguise.
Ken: That had to be the most terrifying fiction he’s ever written.
Hikari: No, that would be ‘Bouncing Baby Bonkers’.
Miyako: (giggles at title) what’s so scary about that? It was relatively well written, sort of in character and didn’t bash a single character.
Hikari: It was a Mykan story and that proves Pika wrong.
Miyako: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!
Daisuke: You know that moon base one is 25 chapters long.
Ken: Guess we have to carry on then.
Everyone: (groans) on with the next chapter then.
I've got up to chapter 5 done I think but it still needs editing and I'd like to make it really good.
However it's so long and with Mykan, he repeats himself alot. I don't know if I could keep the inspiration up so I went for the shorest one I could find just so I could get the hang of it. I might do the moon base one anyway... but I'm still not sure. 