Dreams

[Goggles]

I know, I know. I'm not much of an action writer myself.

[nightshroud19]

haha I'm just not much of a writer lol I'm the musician not the writer

[nightshroud19]

ladies a nd gentleman the reason there has not been a new chapter of Dreams until now, please tell me my fic is not percieved by you guys as this guy did

This story is pretty out there, but I like it!

It's pretty cool how Tai is sleeping in class. I totally agree with your view on him - he's a lazy snob that doesn't care about his own future or any responsibilities that he has placed on him. He'll freely put himself into a bad position without a care in the world all because he doesn't care. After all, who gives a crap about school anyways? It's all useless and Tai is awesome enough to know that. Sleeping is awesome!

I also like how Izzy is in his class too. I say screw it to the fact that Tai's a year older than him; they're friends and they deserve to be in the same class - even if they're just there to sleep. Besides, it's not like Izzy's not smart enough to skip a grade, right? All that time he spends on the computer gotta be good for something... like... hacking into the school network and giving him straight A's while he sleeps during the tests! That's mega whack. Izzy is too cool for school!

So who's this Morgan chick you're going on about? Was she one of your teachers? She sounds like a douche and an obsessive. What parasite has she got crawling around in her brain that she stalks Tai so much to know so much about his personal life? Let the bro sleep! Your class is super boring! Zomg, teacher's are such morons. You wrote moronic teachers down to a T!

Davis is super amazing. I like how he realizes how much Kari is trash and goes to get laid by some other chick. The dude's got potential; he shouldn't waste it on garbage like Kari. She's stupid, she's flat, and I hear she keeps birth control pills in that digital camera of hers where the batteries are supposed to be. But yeah, it's good to see that Davis isn't allowing himself to be whipped. He needs to go bed many more woman than just that one girl Kari found him sleeping with. I support Die-Kari! BURN HER SHE'S A WITCH! SHE TURNED ME INTO A NEWT! I got better, though.

I like how you brought Mimi back from America. America sucks, and Mimi moving to America sucks, too. I like Britain. She should've moved there. American's think they speak American, but they're really speaking British. Speaking British is so much more awesome than speaking American. Speaking Canadian is okay, too. I hear Australian sounds kinda like British, but it's kinda off in some places. I know this one girl in Singapore; I wonder if she's ever heard Australian.

Anyways, I wanna get back to talking about Tai now! Since he's super awesome and becomes even more awesome as the story goes on. Yeah, the teacher blows hardcore and I'm so happy to see Tai sees this too! I like how he lies to her! After all, teacher's suck, and did I mention they're morons, too? If not, I want to say teachers are morons. Tai was right to wave her off, since she's unimportant and we'll probably never see her again for the remainder of the story. Screw that Morgan; she's such a female dog!

I also like how Sora kisses Tai the second he appears. It nicely shows how she's totally and utterly obsessed with him, as she rightly should be, and would die if she were to be prevented from having intimate contact with him. And rightly so, Sora should be dead if she's not dating/kissing/humping Tai. That's her entire purpose and I'm glad we see eye to eye on this. She's completely pointless and useless if she's not dating Tai.

It's kinda cool how Matt's all jealous and off to the side. Lone wolf 4eva!1

I like how Azza's first introduction is that he's better at using computers than even Izzy. That's mega sweet. Maybe he's the one that's hacking into the school computer network to fix Tai and Izzy's grades? But that aside, the Myotismon arc was the super most awesome moment in all of Digimon, and as such it's the most perfect time frame to insert yourself and say you did all these super awesome things to help the DigiDestined. You're so cool! I wish I could've helped the DigiDestined beat up Myotismon, too!

But Azza's pretty interesting! I like how he becomes more and more of a douchebag as the story goes on. Like, for example, I like how he brings up that goggles don't equal leader - even though Davis never mentioned them at all. That's real douchebaggery! He's insulting both Tai and Davis at the same time! And I think that totally rocks. Tai's a bonehead as mentioned earlier, and Davis needs to toss bonehead's goggles away and become his own man and deflower many virgins. Who cares about Kari? She's as useless without a man as Sora, and I'm glad you share my thoughts too since she becomes TK's love-slave later on in the story! You kill two birds with one stone, since TK is useless without Kari, too. It's kinda funny how two totally useless people can magically become useful after saying they love each other and kissing.

Though, I'll be honest, I was hoping Kari and Azza would get together and make babies. My hopes grew very high when the other DigiDestined left the computer lab and only Kari was left behind to "chat" with Azza. After all, don't they make the cutest couple ever? Azza knows how to make her smile after her entire world crashed once she realized she didn't have Davis wrapped around her finger and that he found someone that humps better than she does.

Oh! And how he makes her smile! I think that's the best thing in the world. I love the f-bomb, I really do! And I think it's the perfect way to make Kari smile. The f-word is probably the most colorful word in the British Language! It can be an action verb (TK really gives a f-), a passive verb (Kari really doesn't give a f-), an adverb (Kari is f-ing interested in TK), or as a noun (Kari is a terrific f-). It can also be used as an adjective (Kari is f-ing beautiful) or an interjection (F-! I'm late for my date with Kari.) It can even be used as a conjunction (Kari is easy, f- she's also stupid). As you can see, there are very few words with the overall versatility of the word "f-" and I'm certain using it will bring a smile on Kari's face 100% guaranteed!

And I'm glad to see that Azza was smart enough to see that TK and Kari love each other, even though he hasn't been in Japan for over two years. It clearly shows that Kari is stupid and isn't able to see that the poor useless boy in front of her is useless without her. Once again, I support Die-Kari! It was amusing to see Azza laugh at her stupidity; it's one more thing Azza and I have in common! We both think Kari is stupid and laugh at her.

But Davis is cool though. I like how he's so much better than everyone. It's clear he let Tai off easy after their scuffle where he got that injured nose. After all, Tai's a lazy sloth and I can't imagine him getting enough energy to land a good punch - he'd probably fall asleep as his fist was traveling through the air. It was good of Davis to consider Tai's well-being and not ruin his future soccer career... umm... that is, if Tai ever decides to stop sleeping and actually get some athletics done. All that's left is for Davis to lay the smackdown on this Azza douche for putting down the goggles. Nobody badmouths the goggles and lives...! So says Chuck Norris!

Hehe, and then we have TK proving his uselessness without Kari by being unable to inform anyone about anything while they question him about Azza. How so totally like him. It's a shame he didn't get to hump Kari before he was questioned. Davis and the others might have actually learned something then. But I'm glad he did end up humping Kari later on! It means we've lowered the amount of useless characters in this story! Super sweet!

I'd read onwards, but I kinda grew bored of the story now that TK and Kari fell in love. That's kinda the only reason I read it, and now that they're in love I don't feel like reading anymore. You should write more fics about TK and Kari falling in love, I'd read those!

Awesome story! You're a totally awesome dude! I hope you get a chick one day, too.

[Goggles]

*reads*

*chuckles and raises hand* Guilty. You did notice the blatant sarcasm, right?

[nightshroud19]

THAT WAS YOU!!!!!

[Goggles]

Oct 13, 2009 2:06:10 GMT -5 @nightshroud19 said:

THAT WAS YOU!!!!!

Huh?

[nightshroud19]

was it you who wrote that?

[Goggles]

Nope. Though now, I half-wish I did.

[nightshroud19]

uh why? and no offence Goggles but your different lately in fact you've been a bit of an arse

[Goggles]

Huh? Oh, I'm sorry I didn't make myself clear.
You said

Oct 12, 2009 13:10:32 GMT -5 @nightshroud19 said:

please tell me my fic is not percieved by you guys as this guy did

to which I replied I did, to some degree. That was only at first, though.
You do remember our first conversation? Some of the parts he/she pointed out were similar to some of my concerns at the time (like Daisuke bedding a girl, for example)

And when I said

Oct 13, 2009 12:15:12 GMT -5 Goggles said:

Nope. Though now, I half-wish I did.

I meant that I wish I had his/her creativity in writing such verbose and (to a certain extent, due to the sarcasm) funny/interesting/awesome critiques such as he did whenever I come across a truly horrible/wonderful fic(not that yours deserves his/her sarcasm, of course).

Sorry I've been, how do I say this without triggering the filter, a prick lately. Final exams eating away the last bit of sanity I have right now...

[Goggles]

In any case, I'll still be looking forward to the next chapter.

[nightshroud19]

does anyone actually want to see another chapter of this?

[Goggles]

I don't want to make you sound stupid but please refer to my previous post:

Oct 17, 2009 20:26:42 GMT -5 Goggles said:

In any case, I'll still be looking forward to the next chapter.

[nightshroud19]

yeah didn't re-read it until after i posted

[Digidestined of Trust]

Hmm.. Well I never read this story when you posted it, correction I read one chapter and then never continued it. Very interesting. I felt like pounding stuff when Yoshi died just b/c someone died even if it was an 05 character. I was getting into the battle myself once again going into Power Ranger mode and Arnamon warp digivolving into WarStrongomon. I'm ready to fight!